----My personality is rationalist in four temperaments rationalist,
-- idealist, artist,guardian.Because I have feelings that want to know
-- the process why it became such a result. If I do not understand why
--it becme such a result, it becomes impossible for me to sleep
--at night.But I have another temperament.That is Artist.
--Because I am a setter in my belonging volleyball team. Generally
--spesking, setter is the center of a team and a commanding officer in
--a game.So a position called "setter" needs to take the act as a leader
-- and have a strong sence of responsibility.In concluson, I want to
-- understand how things work and have a leadership, so I
--have two twmperaments, artist, rationalist.
First of all, pleae use the spell check button on the top of the page to check your spelling! Next, so not hit the enter key when writing. Your work will not look so choppy. Next, do not repeat the same word in the next sentence. Use another word or a pronoun (he , she, it,.)Some minor mistakes, but good. 8/10
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